In response to Jeff's feedback regarding
my last attempt at photomanipulation, here's another attempt to craft...well, I'm not sure what this is. An early frame of a film? A movie poster? Anyway, as Jeff suggested I've tried to reduce the emphasis on "the" and "that," and I've also chopped out a section of the wall, bringing the sign right down over the door. You can see that the wall colours don't quite match; I'm not sure yet how to fix that. But overall, I think this represents an improvement. As Jeff says, "baby steps..."
Shouldn't it be "The pickup which roared"? I can never keep that straight.
ReplyDeleteApparently not: http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/which.html
ReplyDeleteYou are definitely getting your Photoshop on!
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